Thursday 8 November 2018

DANGEROUS FIREWORKS

This is my persuasion writing about how to ban fireworks to keep on coming and selling things

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DANGEROUS FIREWORKS

 I think that Fireworks should be banned because it can hurt other people and some people might not know how to do it. The first reason is that Fireworks are DANGEROUS because it can burn down your house easy like you know how the fireworks goes up in the air and how it explodes those little pieces from the firework can go anywhere like to your house or other peoples houses and it might burn your . It is not safe because if you go to close you might get on fire from the fireworks and from the lighter. It can also Hurt people and if there was smoke you can die because if you stay there you have 30 min and then you can die. The fireworks can also go sideways it can go anywhere it can go into your house other people’s houses and it can also go where you are sitting with your family. Fireworks are really expensive it is like $50 for one boombox it is like burning your own money.It's only last one night. You can also buy it ever again you can only buy it once which is when it is Guy Fawkes. Another reason is pets and animals.Animals can easily up to the fire and they can burn down they can get hurt really bad.Kids and animals kid gets really scared because of the fireworks exploding and the air it's run away and never come back it's can also get really scared because it might be a little puppy.

1 comment:

  1. Hi there Edyn, you have some good ideas of why we should ban fireworks. I agree that they are dangerous. Your persuasion would be more effective if you put each of your great ideas into their own paragraph.

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